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want it (Ode) by sontei

i want you in the bushes i want you in the grass i want you in the brambles that really cut my arse i want you with your clothes on i want you in the nude i want you wearing leather and talking really rude i want you in a limo i want you on a bus i want you in a taxi if one turns up for us i want you as my lover i want you as my wife i want you in my bedroom for every day of my life

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Sep-02/6:44 PM
Expand upon the second stanza. I am intrigued as to how the suggestion of nudity pans out!




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