Ranger1 Jul 2006

This is extremely effective as a 'waiting-and-foreboding' piece, stanza 2 in particular. 'Flashing mimic bird', 'dark west', 'black locusts'. All excellent. But, dammit, I've used reference to wind & sea in the poem I was going to submit today...I think I'll leave it for a while...
All round top stuff as is to be expected and like ALChemy says, I'm glad to see you around :-)