kawakurdi11 Sep 2002
I understand that the context of your exiestence and your life experience are different and you canot relate to this. But I posted it on 11 September to allow readers a linkage of feeling. The original poem is not English and the rythm and flow are lost in translation. But what is weak? Language is for description/expression of emotion, ideas and situations. They all exist in this poem though you find it difficult to interconnect because you get bored quickly. That is part of your culture. Nothing with depth and permanence but just quick fix and fast food. Thanks anyway for allowing yourself to be bored by my poems and tell me this.