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Money Back (Free verse) by drnick

wikedddd smiles and fifty dollars and no apologies you came snd shoved your fist inside with no apologies your vomit yur face your nose and throat no apologies stupid face will always show there's no apologeze.

Ranger 25-Jun-06/11:45 AM
Great repeating lines, they make this catchy and cool. A bit more punctuation wouldn't go amiss though.

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