LilMsLadyPoet16 Jun 2006
Oh...Oh my...this has to be one of my favorites.
Hauntingly beautiful, and beautifully crafted.
Lovely, lovely.
All but the line:
"Which would scatter like a broken stone"
change that and you get my 10...keep it, and get a high 9 :)
Have I ever told you I am in lust with your mind, at moments like this?