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I Never Promised You a Rose Garden (Free verse) by oneglove

Pick a petal Watch it fall One by one All for all Play the game An empty stem The answer known He still loves them A broken flower Still bears thorns A rose is lost A garden born Crimson lawns Remind one thing From dark November The light of spring

amanda_dcosta 2-Jun-06/5:54 AM
I bet you know this one...

"I beg your pardon,
I never promised you a rose garden
along with the sunshine
you're gonna need a little rain sometime."
(Song--Rose Garden by Linda Anderson, or so)




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