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Descartes' Immortal Truth (Limerick) by Edna Sweetlove

Whilst squatting one day on my pan As steaming turds surged from my can, I thought of Descartes After pumping a fart; What truth! "I shit therefore I am".

Ranger 1-Jun-06/5:14 AM
Last line goes on a bit. A bit overwritten ('What truth!'). Not bad though.




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