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Descartes' Immortal Truth (Limerick) by Edna Sweetlove

Whilst squatting one day on my pan As steaming turds surged from my can, I thought of Descartes After pumping a fart; What truth! "I shit therefore I am".

Dan garcia-Black 23-May-06/10:44 AM
This poem is excellent but for one fact. The dead will have, on occasion, a bowel movement after bacteria and gas have their way with food left in stomach and intestines. So, one may shit and not be. Sorry.




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