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Godproof Hat (Limerick) by Dovina

Oh, for a hand on my cranial hair In place of god’s that isn’t there To protect from theistic wrath and such Provide a gentle protective touch Perhaps a godlike Buddhistic affair I used to think God was very large cat With teeth in my neck like I were a rat Then he kicked me outside Where I hollered and cried Now I wear a cat-skin hat

ALChemy 22-May-06/10:11 PM
The last stanza reminds me of the closing animation of every Flintstone episode.




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