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Numbers add to nothing (Free verse) by Caducus

Eighth cell one man four straps thirty four years, five murders. Three syringes four guards eighteen Witnesses thirty four years - six months and four days, gone in two minutes eleven seconds. One Bible in two limp hands, One last thought 23-09-56 exodus. four tears sixteen smiles. One priest. One prayer. One day in America nothing changes.

Caducus 20-May-06/2:45 AM
how about 16 half closed eyes? - idea behind that is to imply they have to see it so they can know the murderers gone but at the same time they find the idea barbaric?




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