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Mannequin (Free verse) by Roisin

Accrue accrue accrue. Build the person You; with job and house and him and them, just don't forget the glue.

Niphredil 16-May-06/4:56 AM
Oh, fun. Me likee. -8-

I rather enjoy the spacing, even though I don't get what it's supposed to mean... it seems rigid; I connected it to squeezing indviduals into a predetermined mold, and so it felt appropriate.




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