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With a pithy stroke (Haiku) by D. $ Fontera

Chamberlain comes Death, On the stair in robes, lamplight. My pen, still: hand paused.

Dovina 15-May-06/7:32 PM
The last line seems to say the same thing twice, which, in a haiku, is far too many.




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