Dovina15 May 2006

Thanks for your comments. I fixed the typo in Line 12. I changed “would” to “will” in the last line for clarification. The “SHE” for emphasis is the way I would read it aloud, to contrast with her father's weeping Line 5. But it looks audacious on paper, and I see your point about capitalization not being needed. I would use italics if that were an option in Poemranker.