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Mannequin (Free verse) by Roisin

Accrue accrue accrue. Build the person You; with job and house and him and them, just don't forget the glue.

Ranger 15-May-06/7:31 AM
I think you edited this straight after I posted, hence the vote not showing. If I'm honest, it was easier to read in it's first version - is this meant as an image (I'm a little slow today, bear with me if I don't get it instantly)? It's a neat little look at the way we build our lives according to social trends, and not always having any depth to them. At least, that's how I read it.




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