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The Writing Life (Haiku) by poetandknowit

#3 deadline on Tuesday neighbor mows and weed whacks lawn again and again

beakism 11-Sep-02/10:00 AM
I'm not quite sure if you're being ironic. Whether or not you are, I think my comment was perfectly suited. You have to say 'unlucky' with proper emphasis on the 'l' and a smug chuckle during the 'ucky', rasing your eyebrows throughout; that way, you get the strongest feeling of 'I'm pissed off and you're pissing me off even more so now I'm going to break your face'.




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