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colourful cavalcade
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Free verse
) by
pollywolly
a crimson cascade capers to the ground from the creaking branches above cavorting to create a crimson carpet on a crisp autumn morn
Paul S
5-May-06/9:33 PM
I agree with Ranger. This is good, but continuing the alliteration would make it bewtter.
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