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colourful cavalcade (Free verse) by pollywolly

a crimson cascade capers to the ground from the creaking branches above cavorting to create a crimson carpet on a crisp autumn morn

Paul S 5-May-06/9:33 PM
I agree with Ranger. This is good, but continuing the alliteration would make it bewtter.




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