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light [edited] (Haiku) by lmp

yellow-pink rind fades next to morning light's luster upon your soft skin

lmp 28-Apr-06/7:43 AM
well, it is complete in my mind because i was there. i remeber the morning still, and that was over 10, no 11, years ago. so maybe it is a little obscure. so, what?




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