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Lost and Found (Prose Poem) by annadoc

I'm lost and I'm found Differences abound; I'm weak and I'm strong to be a part, oh "to belong" I'm short and I'm tall will the last facade fall? I'm light and I'm dark the contrast is stark; I'm joy and I'm pain what is to be our gain? I sink and I swim pour the glass of gin; I lose and I win can't we all be put in? I'm lost and I'm found ... I'm losing ground I'm cruel, but I'm kind I want peace of mind.

Ranger 25-Apr-06/6:21 AM
Good call. I was wondering what to listen to next, choice made. I agree with the toning down of opposites in here; in my eyes this wants to be rewritten with a more flexible rhythm.

N. - I have a story on the way for you, I'll see if I can get it done in time to send to you later today.




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