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Story remains the same (Free verse) by annadoc

Though the language varies, our stories are the same we all possess emotions, devotions our laughs, our cries, our loves, our lies; grandness of life itself we express differently the language varies though our stories remain the same the sum of all our parts that which lies within our hearts

annadoc 19-Apr-06/2:16 PM
thank you for the thoughts...what I truly need to improve ... and I've been reading others and have to compose my thoughts on those and give my feed back... and I feel I can get some useful inspiration --

I also thought this was a cliche (myself).




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