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jay (Free verse) by ecargo

The seesaw slide-whistle from the pine pulls me out, white blue blue sky swirl flash audacity of bird bowing, chortling.

Ranger 17-Apr-06/2:10 AM
Great fun to read, the final line is pretty cartoon-y. Plenty to see in only 5 lines; very well written.




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