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my girl's day [tri-ku]
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Haiku
) by
lmp
morning sunbeams catch fairies dancing in the air; my girl claps with glee. golden curls bouncing, her shadow shortens, she runs, her laughter fluid. quiet face looks up to moonlight and stars above. she whispers goodnight.
lmp
14-Apr-06/9:01 AM
reworked the second verse, though it seems a bit rough yet. awaiting your review.
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