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Or Outward (Triolet) by MacFrantic

Vagaries in dispassionate red Or outward sounds the bell A monument to furies' spell Vagaries in dispassionate red Fragile storms eclipse your head Speak your name and know it well Vagaries in dispassionate red Or outward sounds the bell

ecargo 10-Apr-06/7:34 AM
Yes, they are. I frown on "intentional grammar flaws" even more than the other kind. ;)

If you capped Furies, I'd've known what you meant without the explanation. Capping them wouldn't have thrown anything off, really. I thought you meant "fury's spell," which would have worked, by the way. Maybe even better.

That aside, I don't get much sense from this. Now, if something is interesting enough, I don't always care if I get it (I like Dental Panic's stuff a great deal, for example, and half the time I'm damned if I know what he or she is talking about), but I don't think you quite hit the mark here.




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