poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on James The Dashing Pirate(Rewrite) by Luzr.

Ranger9 Apr 2006

Great words, I felt as though the metaphor could be taken further; I don't see quite enough of the swashbuckling, buccaneering nature, hunting for treasure and adventure. And although the Casanova line is good, I didn't think it managed to fit well with the pirate theme.
Aside from that, well written and enjoyable!