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James The Dashing Pirate(Rewrite) (Free verse) by Luzr

He is simple and unique, relentlessly cunning. An epic adventure packed into a coloring book. Rated R for language and explicit content Daringly devoted, to making a smile cross your lips An arrogant aside, beautifully stunning. With a smart baby blues they call him the one night casanova Champagne for the price of beer Heads become heels, his heels become gold waltzing through conversations A simple melody, catchy and quick. With great depth, and hidden perceptions.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 8-Apr-06/1:55 PM
Or I could be patient, let others read it, hear some good advice, and not behave like a child when the "Mature" Adults say something I don't like. Arguing online is like being in the special olympics, even if you win, your still a retard.




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