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Or Outward (Triolet) by MacFrantic

Vagaries in dispassionate red Or outward sounds the bell A monument to furies' spell Vagaries in dispassionate red Fragile storms eclipse your head Speak your name and know it well Vagaries in dispassionate red Or outward sounds the bell

Dovina 8-Apr-06/11:49 AM
I'd personally prefer that when you edit a poem, you do not delete the comments.

This falls flat for me. Too vague.




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