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Buried (Free verse) by Enkidu

For the sake of Gallantry I'll tussle in the wood And make an offering To nymphs Of condescending good There I shall unweave The very fabric Of your soul And ask the Earth To swallow us Beneath her Weathered knoll

Ranger 7-Apr-06/12:21 AM
So close to conjuring up great imagery - I can actually picture the setting, but it's almost entirely down to my imagination and associations of woods and nymphs. This is the sort of piece which requires a bit more on the author's behalf; give us some more scenery. What's there is good, but I'm greedy. I want more.




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