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The Obelisk (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Looming Damning high Tame the pompous sun Rise up at such heights Like all that obsidian Clap the moaning wind For scalloped might And peppering It is a shallow lean Where shadows come sing Cloud bearer Far lengthy pyramid Doubts unbound It almost hymns Rumbles deep and proud Order Disorder nigh The fall for fearful eye Watch the tower bend In lapsed collapsing ends

patty t 1-Apr-06/10:59 PM
love how the last line collapses




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