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Old Friend (Free verse) by drnick

Dear old friend of mine How I've missed you time-to-time In the back of my mind You've been stowed Won't you sing me a song I found my dreams are long gone Somewhere in a letter I told you so My mind cannot fathom Even in post-graduate fashion Just how or why I let you go And as surely as I Won't let our memories die Is as surely As your distance grows

drnick 1-Apr-06/1:09 PM
I would hope that one who had assimilated that much information would have had their mind expanded/enlightened in the process, but perhaps that's not the point of college(not to most americans, anyways)?

Yes that was the rather weak comparison I was making, and I'm assuming you meant verse four. I'm trying to think of a better last line.




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