Dovina31 Mar 2006

I like the first two verses.

But verse three says that even in post-graduate fashion, your mind cannot fathom how you let him/her go, as if post-graduateness affects your ability to fathom such things.

In verse three, "our memories" implies that her/his memories are available for you to evaluate as unending as the wind.

But these are minor nits. Overall good.