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Old Friend (Free verse) by drnick

Dear old friend of mine How I've missed you time-to-time In the back of my mind You've been stowed Won't you sing me a song I found my dreams are long gone Somewhere in a letter I told you so My mind cannot fathom Even in post-graduate fashion Just how or why I let you go And as surely as I Won't let our memories die Is as surely As your distance grows

drnick 31-Mar-06/10:44 AM
Ya, the first line of stanza 2 is a bit lame. I knew it didn't sound quite right, but I couldn't think of anything else so I was hoping someone would help me out. When are you going to post something?




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