poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Your Eyes Are Like Stearling Saphires in the month of June by tisa7.

god'swife30 Mar 2006

The title is beautiful but I think you meant Sterling not Stearling. Also this is not free verse. Free verse doesn't have a rhyme pattern this poem does- AABB.

Don't give yourself anonymous 10's or ask your friends to, it's not worth losing your dignity. Are you serious about learnig to write poetry or are you just experimenting?