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Your Eyes Are Like Stearling Saphires in the month of June (Free verse) by tisa7

As I release my painful sighs I look into your beautiful eyes It's like gazing through space " Oh what a beautiful place"

god'swife 30-Mar-06/7:12 PM
The title is beautiful but I think you meant Sterling not Stearling. Also this is not free verse. Free verse doesn't have a rhyme pattern this poem does- AABB.

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