poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Kristi's Quiescence by matt door.

Ranger30 Mar 2006

'Her saddest smile...' got me going, I feel there's more waiting to be said from there. However, I also think it would spoil the swift beauty of this one. I really like the brevity of it, although I'm not convinced by the first two lines. Still a very pleasant read.