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Time Will Change (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

Time will change like the leaves on a tree Love will come and go But you will soon be set free Life will go on like a slow ticking clock Your heart will take a different beat But life won't be the same until you knock You will hear someone answer with a mighty voice God will come into your heart to live forever But in the end it's God's choice

x0lovelylarnx0 29-Mar-06/11:30 AM
For one thing I'm certaintly not a man. Sometimes a short poem has more meaning than a long poem. I'm not 9. Some of your poems like like they were written by 5 year olds. Learn how to spell. You couldn't possibly be mature to have put I like horny girls in your profile. How can you say no rudeness intended? That is definitely a rude comment to say the work is lame, but if you put it the way you did: THEWORK IS LAME. I don't know what THEWORK means doesn't look like a word to me.




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