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Kristi's Quiescence
(
Free verse
) by
matt door
She empties me, so carefully, with her saddest smile come autumn. She folds me gently with regret, and sets me softly in her sentiment. She lays me just aside, (such a warm repose from winter), for when the birds come back once more.
ecargo
29-Mar-06/7:15 AM
Not bad, but it seems too familiar, done.
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