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Time Will Change (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

Time will change like the leaves on a tree Love will come and go But you will soon be set free Life will go on like a slow ticking clock Your heart will take a different beat But life won't be the same until you knock You will hear someone answer with a mighty voice God will come into your heart to live forever But in the end it's God's choice

x0lovelylarnx0 28-Mar-06/11:31 AM
I like your suggestion about the last line, but I will have to think over whether i want to change it or not. I also agree with you on the comments thing, but when I saw that 0 I just boiled.




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