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Time Will Change (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

Time will change like the leaves on a tree Love will come and go But you will soon be set free Life will go on like a slow ticking clock Your heart will take a different beat But life won't be the same until you knock You will hear someone answer with a mighty voice God will come into your heart to live forever But in the end it's God's choice

x0lovelylarnx0 25-Mar-06/5:09 AM
No that poem is not just words jumbled up on paper and also it did not deserve a 0 at all. That poem won contests, and is even in books. I worked hard to write that poem and it just does not desreve a 0. In christian beliefs, on judgement day it is going to be God's choice on whether you have eternal life with him or eternal life in hell. Sounds like to me that sice your comment was sarcastic that you don't believe in God, but that is not a reason to give someone a zero. I'm offened very much by your comment. just because someone has different beliefs doesn't mean that you go off and say something rude to them.




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