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Life Is Like A Rose (Free verse) by x0lovelylarnx0

Life is like a rose budding on a Sunday morning Life could end at any moment so live life to the fullest Life is all about taking chances But sometimes it's cut too short The power of a mighty storm killed hundreds Fatal car accidents break young teen's parents hearts Always forgive even if it's hard Life is beautiful and mysterious We never know what could come our way next Always try your hardest to do your best School work is a block in the road to having fun But school is one of the most important things if you want to be something when you grow up First and only first is where God comes He created your life and he knows when it ends Never forget that you alone have your own purpose Life is like a rose budding on a Sunday morning

Ranger 22-Mar-06/2:57 AM
Yes, Dovina and wilco are spot on, I think. This is excellent material as a draft or as ideas on a page but they'll take work to bring together. Every poet has written about a rose at sometime or another - but it's as good a place as any to start. The first line is really nice, so build on it!




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