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3/12/06 (Free verse) by cronus

oh god i'll never be well again will i? pouring out blood black ink bitter on the page not as much as it needs to be knowing what it is makes swallowing that much harder

Ranger 16-Mar-06/7:21 AM
'Have you ever stood in the way of harm...?' Yes - my 'conversations' with poetandknowit are testament to that! But then again, I was young and foolish...(what's changed?)

Anyway, I've read through your stuff and I like your style, you write pretty well - but you always seem to struggle for comments. I really think that with feedback from the top poets here (most of whom are always around to comment) you could do well. Try posting feedback on other peoples' poems and you'll get plenty in return!




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