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3/12/06 (Free verse) by cronus

oh god i'll never be well again will i? pouring out blood black ink bitter on the page not as much as it needs to be knowing what it is makes swallowing that much harder

cronus 16-Mar-06/6:57 AM
The last stanza was written more in the sense of bile, but I can see your point about it having many comic interpretations :)
Have you ever stood in the way of harm, not because you had good reason, but because pride didn't allow any other option? That was the mood I was in when I wrote this. What I was actually thinking is anyone's guess.




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