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Indianapolis Since (Free verse) by matt door

Behind school 61 - in the wide-eyed field of green and was, still stands that willow tree, with the carved trunk, of the names and hearts of Patricia Street; Still shadowing the love of young wishes; Casting the perfect shade of once; I'll wait for you in Indianapolis - and miss you in between.

Dovina 14-Mar-06/7:45 PM
Seems like "the love of young wishes" should be "the wishes of young love." A nice sentiment.




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