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Desolation (Free verse) by Beyond_Dreams

I'm hiding within this cascading oppression. your breath carries me away, so I reach for you; but nothing seems tangible. Shuffling emotions from deep within, scatter along the roadside; hidden from my own existence. The shadows dance when I fall upon broken glass. My damaged body only seems like a reflection from my insanity buried inside my innocence. And the world spins around me manipulating reality to a paradigm, Scorched and shunned I denounce you. And it's not until I pull my individuality back and let that hold me together, that I remember you. I no longer need to sacrifice who I am to be happy without you, It's that I'm happy with you. I'm happy knowing I don't have to succumb to the conglomerate views of the world and I'm no longer poisoned with lies. Axiom.

Dark Angle 13-Mar-06/3:42 PM
what always bothers me is that when Green Day or U2 does it they are hailed as prolific artists with vision and great depth but when some Joe Everybody does it they are lamblasted as charlatans of the world of words.




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