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Boundaries (Free verse) by Dhanesh M Kumar

The four walls fortifying the realms make it to yell beyond the walls, The fetters that build it to quell the fondle triggers a wobbly, Staggering changeling. This child edifies the nature’s statue that which bonds till the pyre, an incredible Crinkle deep in the roots, an infamous urge to Crackle the chains. A passionate bird that migrate miles; A jubilant dolphin that divulge to ether; A giraffe’s head that jettisons out; All of these are Mother’s credentials.

Dovina 13-Mar-06/8:01 AM
I don't get the first verse. The second verse picks up some catchy phrases and rhythm. Only the last two lines geve some clue on what you might be saying.




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