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Spoken word (draft) (Free verse) by Adriaan

Words are fluid until fixed into Writing Writing is the basis of Law Law is the codification of Behaviour Behaviour requires being decent which means asking consent before acting on intent or basically management of Feelings Feelings are fluid until fixed into Action Action is the basis of Life Life is a consequence of Sex ... (tbc)

Ranger 13-Mar-06/5:27 AM
Decent fragment, the idea's pretty good - but I'm curious as to where you're going with it.




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