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3/12/06 (Free verse) by cronus

oh god i'll never be well again will i? pouring out blood black ink bitter on the page not as much as it needs to be knowing what it is makes swallowing that much harder

Ranger 12-Mar-06/12:01 PM
'black ink/bitter...' makes me think you're talking about Guinness.
I'm really not sure what to make of this...particularly the last stanza is open to many, many 'comic' interpretations. Was that intentional? I'll need to have a think about this before I can post anything of any use.




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