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Oaxaca city fragment (Free verse) by poetandknowit

hollow gut women search shit filled gutters for food scraps mongrel pups ready for the razor and half feathered, Johne's infested starving cocks sniffed and pecked past, before being caught and butchered to feed bony yellow babies sickened by birth.

[mojo] 10-Sep-02/12:43 PM
Hard to read, guess that makes it well written? Hard to give a particularly good score to something so unpleasant.7. Hey, enough of the poetry advice, you need some travel guidance...next time go to Taxco, it's pretty. Come to think of it Mexico City seems better than the place you describe :). Hell, make that 8, it makes me feel good about living in the UK.




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