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ReplyTo a comment on Spring Rolls by Ranger.

BenRice9 Mar 2006

Clever.

The word "pastry" ... just doesn't strike me as the right word, but I can't come up with something better, so maybe it is. "biting" cold... hmm not quite right with me either, but maybe that is just spring in Colorado.

The spring roll metaphor works to evoke the variety of weather, color and life of spring.