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the comet (Free verse) by pollywolly

whispering almost glistening visable to the naked eye tail ablaze across the sky the comet flies and flies ever high high and higher this burning sphere draws never nearer fear her! need we fear her?

Ranger 9-Mar-06/11:56 AM
Quite cool, but you could probably turn this into a concrete poem. Which would be definitely cool.
I liked the ending.




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