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10/8 (Free verse) by cronus

I have sacrificed all that I loved in the arms of an uncaring god you may say that I've gone too far but I know its not nearly enough

Ranger 8-Mar-06/9:36 AM
The problem is, you call God uncaring. If he doesn't care, then it won't matter a jot what you sacrifice - nothing will be enough, because there isn't an 'enough' to achieve. I'd suggest changing 'uncaring' to pretty much anything else. Then it will become a little clearer.




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