poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer.

Dovina7 Mar 2006

I was starting to get into this - understand your viewpoint, when I hit Verse 5 and the sudden introduction of the character "He." Since "brethren" is such a religious-sounding word, I assumed "He" is God and proceeded past the bump. Then as it gets back to your conundrum, I thought of Paul, and his sorting out of mixed pullings in writing to the Corintheans.

I don't see this as preaching, even though you're speaking to the brethren, but as trying to settle a chaotic mind.

You might want to reword, "do not restrain your tongue, offering words of quick apology or gracious forgiveness & accession," as it seems to conflict a former statement.