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my girl's day [tri-ku] (Haiku) by lmp

morning sunbeams catch fairies dancing in the air; my girl claps with glee. golden curls bouncing, her shadow shortens, she runs, her laughter fluid. quiet face looks up to moonlight and stars above. she whispers goodnight.

lmp 6-Mar-06/2:30 PM
i suppose they are. i don't really think in a 5-7-5 manner, so i guess it is like trying on a suit to see what it feels like.
perhaps i will go back to my old khakis and rollneck sweater. ;P




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